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You can read the first chapter here so you don't fall behind: ''Fear n' Confusion'' - THOMAS' NIGHTMARE (Cha. 1)
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TW TOM'S POV:

    As I was walking on the clear red path, I started seeing things that others could not. I began having hallucinations that I knew were going to haunt the back of my head for as long as I can remember, and trust me on this one..hallucinations are scary. VERY VERY scary. You began seeing made-up monsters that look surprisingly real, and you think the things you see are always out to get you. Anyways, these things I were seeing looked...like my past pals. They look just like them.

    Green, red, purple, and...that blue. That blue one that is always looking out after me. Ever since the day I was born...these hallucinations felt..so real. Like I could touch it and feel it with my bare hands. My dry, hopeless hands. I stopped in my tracks, and covered my face.

     "Get away..get away!" I yelled. "Get out!" I continued. I uncovered my face, and looked around. I was still in the same black area. I didn't expect for me to magically disappear right off the bat. I'm a very patient person, unlike...him.

    I continued walking on the path, only to greet a door that was as tall as me. I stared at it for a brief moment, and thought about the consequences about me opening this very door. "What's gonna happen? Am I going to die? Is this the end of me? Will I never wake up? What's happening? WHY?'' my mind was screaming these questions in both of my ears, even if others couldn't hear it.

    I hesitated several times. My hands and legs were shaking vigorously, and I felt like I couldn't take matters into my own palms. Sweat was dripping slowly down the sides of my face, as I slowly and gradually turned the door knob. The door in front of me opened. The door squeaked, and echoed through the dark abyss. My heart began to pick up, as I saw nothing on the other side of the door..as if I was scammed.

    "What's going on here..?" I said, in confusion. "Is this a trick? show yourself!" I yelled. My voice echoed along with my heartbeat. My heartbeat was so strong, that I felt like sound-waves were emitting from my chest and all throughout the fake reality location. I slowly kept walking.

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    Sometime later, and I felt so tired. My legs felt like they were gonna pop straight off. I have very weak legs, so I actually really despise walking for a long period of time. I decided to take a small break to help me and my poor legs. I went on one knee and layed down on the floor, and closed my eyes. I eventually fell asleep.

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    For what felt like forever, I slowly opened my eyes and yawned. I kinda expected to leave this place, but I didn't. I was still in the same place. ''Oh, come on! I just wanna...leave..'' I said, tearing up a bit. "N-no..I have to keep pushing forward..if I want to get out of here, I have to try my best and keep persevering." I said. ''Because, he always told me..a little effort is better than none, Thomas. You can't let the little things bring you down, he said..right.'' I said.

    I got up and walked through the other side of the door, and onto the next..only to see a face that I remember.

END OF CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3 IS STILL IN DEVELOPMENT
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Soldier-Ixdigo Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I'm honestly so glad you are creating a story out of this! (now finally reading these chapters fndndnd)
You have a unique first-person writing style and I enjoy how this is in TW Tom's POV so far. This is actually really intriguing and I love that.
Plus the cliffhangers fnddndn
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LeticaBR Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooooooooooooh this will be good
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SkipBack Featured By Owner May 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS HYPIN' ME THE FUCK OUT FOR CHAPTER 3.

WHO'S THAT FAMILIAR FACE SSDFDGDF so good this story, so good.
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Yasne6 Featured By Owner Edited May 17, 2018
This is amazing! Your writing is pretty nice and I like how Tom/Thomas isn't giving up :)
I also like the "cliff hangers" is it that? Well, simply how you end the chapters with something and we can only guess what will happen next!
It really makes me hyped for the next chapter.
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VanillaLovesans Featured By Owner May 16, 2018  New Deviant
And the man he saw was himself. In a mirror. I'm best at stories lol
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RAIINY-SKYE Featured By Owner May 16, 2018
Hey can you uhhh take this a bit more seriously?
I worked really fucking hard on it, and I would appreciate support and nice feedback :')
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MaskGirlYT Featured By Owner May 18, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Sorry about messing in but she dint really mean it. she just told me.
so i will just say
"Sorry  I Dint't Really Mean It" By Her name cause she is just...Maybe too anxious. i dont really know she thinks it will just make it worse.
So yeeeeah-
Imma Leave cause i just talked with no permission and...
ye- 
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ToyArcticAJ-TOY Featured By Owner May 16, 2018  New Deviant Student General Artist
AAAAA I LOVE THIS-
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LDuhe07AshTheCutie Featured By Owner May 16, 2018  Hobbyist Filmographer
ASDFGHJKLKJHGFDSAKK I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I WANT TO READ IT OVER AND OVER ASDFGHJKLKJHGFDSAKK—
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GayPet Featured By Owner May 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE HOW THIS IS GOING I WANT TO HUG THE BLUE CHILD HHH
RAIINY THIS IS AWESOME HDHXHZG
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DestinyTheDemon Featured By Owner May 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS GOOD SHIT MY DUDE
wow i actually enjoyed reading something—
aHH this is so coool :0
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